For HER Consideration
Received an email from a coordinator of the bridal shower of a friend. Reminded me that I should empathise why local men can be put off by the authoratative tone from local gals... Everything was written in point form... Even "You are cordially invited blahblahblah..." took up a number bullet...
" 7. Please inform me of the gift you are getting to avoid duplication. Please let me know by 20 Dec. Please let me have your mobile no. if possible"
- I know, this sentence looks normal. But I thought it could sound better on email...
" 9. If you have any suggestion, do share with me for my consideration."
- When I saw the word "my", and where it's positioned, my eyebrows raised. You know, that kind that goes.. "Oookaayy...."
I just felt that tone of the email could be less formal, and more of the kind that "Hey, it's a bridal shower, let's celebrate with and bless the bride-to-be!"
Oh well.
I might have probably done the same thing when I chat with others too :d So, better watch out for that plank-blocked view.
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The high-strung routine I have had for the past month or so was finally released when I submitted my assignment on Friday. And I gone a little out of hand with the new found freedom last evening :d
I went to spent money at the MANGO sale and some other stuffs (Hello Kitty bags on clearance sale, some warehouse sale at Overseas Union House...)
I am still nursing from the bleeding. Hope to do some serious Christmas shopping in the new few days :d
Time for bed.
" 7. Please inform me of the gift you are getting to avoid duplication. Please let me know by 20 Dec. Please let me have your mobile no. if possible"
- I know, this sentence looks normal. But I thought it could sound better on email...
" 9. If you have any suggestion, do share with me for my consideration."
- When I saw the word "my", and where it's positioned, my eyebrows raised. You know, that kind that goes.. "Oookaayy...."
I just felt that tone of the email could be less formal, and more of the kind that "Hey, it's a bridal shower, let's celebrate with and bless the bride-to-be!"
Oh well.
I might have probably done the same thing when I chat with others too :d So, better watch out for that plank-blocked view.
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
The high-strung routine I have had for the past month or so was finally released when I submitted my assignment on Friday. And I gone a little out of hand with the new found freedom last evening :d
I went to spent money at the MANGO sale and some other stuffs (Hello Kitty bags on clearance sale, some warehouse sale at Overseas Union House...)
I am still nursing from the bleeding. Hope to do some serious Christmas shopping in the new few days :d
Time for bed.
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